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07 January 2009 @ 02:19 pm
[1o] FANFIC: When The Fool Becomes King  
title: when the fool becomes king
author: proboscus
rating: NC-17
pairing: xanxus/squalo
summary: Everything she does is for show -- the big sword, the arrogant swing of her hips, the sharp cries of indignation when Xanxus touches her in public.
misc: standard disclaimers apply. NSFW. PWP, meaning this doesn't have any point to it at all. for the inimitable anon who wanted weepy-on-her-first-time!girl!squalo; i apologize for the massive failure to deliver well written porn, rofl. it's not my field of expertise. but i was bored tried.

PS. SQUALO IS A GIRL HERE. (see prompt)

She spits the blood out her mouth and pulls the grass out of her hair, lets out a laugh like she’s real proud of herself and sheathes her sword with a smooth flick of the wrist. Casual like that, and terribly so, graceful even with awkward angles and places that have yet to fill out over the years.

She looks up at him, and there is bloodlust in her eyes, very much unlike the girls here - loud and obnoxious, silver hair, - and the wide swing of her hips when she walks like she is queen of the fucking universe, it drives him fucking crazy. In a bad way. These days, she seems to be everywhere, following him around like some lovesick schoolgirl with a crush, calling him "boss", submitting to his every want and need.

A boy had come up to her earlier to confess, that whiny Cavallone brat with shit for brains, and she'd beat him black and blue until he ran off crying for his mother. Trash just like the rest of them, just like everyone in this fucking school. Now here she is in the aftermath of that confession, the color on her cheeks having deepened after exertion, a combination of obvious ribs and sharp elbows and hair splayed everywhere on the dewy grass.

"Boss," she says in surprise when Xanxus hauls her to feet. She stumbles against him, but holds on fingers clenched into his shirt, knows now is not the time for complaints or questions as Xanxus tightens his hand in hair spun like silver."I saw you and that Cavallone trash," he growls against her ear. "What did he want?"

She starts to laugh, pulls back all too quick even with Xanxus' hand tight in her hair. "VOII. You think I'm stupid enough to date him? I don't date, and even if I did I wouldn't choose him." The hand in her tightens and Xanxus yanks it back so that she lets out a sharp cry. "W-What did I do wrong? VOOI, let my hair go!" But she doesn't struggle, not really, everything she does is for show -- the big sword, the arrogant swing of her hips, the sharp cries of indignation when Xanxus touches her in public. He glares at her, lets go of her hair, then turns on his heel and stomps off. She follows after him without another word, ducking into the limousine, quiet with her head bowed.


Squalo is his in every sense of the word, but her blind devotion doesn't count for anything; it doesn't make her any less useless and she's still like the rest of them. He leans over her, fingering the hollow of her ribs with the pad of a thumb, and she gasps when his fingers circle a nipple, sensitive to each touch, each puff of breath Xanxus breathes over her skin.

They're in his bedroom now, on his bed, schoolbooks on the floor, Squalo's long legs parted, as Xanxus slides the sock off her ankle slowly. "You want to prove your loyalty?" he says into her ear, "this is how you prove your fucking loyalty." He slips the sock off completely, crumpling it in a fist and tossing it over his shoulder on the floor where their shoes and neckties are.

He lowers himself on top of her, lays between her legs. She's easy, and lifts her skirt up herself, nodding in understanding, further spreading her knees. Something flashes in her eyes, something sharp like bloodlust. Maybe she's challenging him, maybe she's afraid, Xanxus will never know, he doesn't care. He slides a hand, flat, between her legs, and presses a thumb against the damp cotton of her panties. Black, drawstring. He chuckles and presses his face against the material, inhales her feminine scent, darting his tongue to lap at the wetness that slips past the swell of her clitoris. He rolls the taste in his mouth before leaning down to kiss her - it's not really a kiss thought because he presses their mouths together and forces his tongue between her teeth.

He kneads the flap of skin through the flimsy fabric of her panties. Squalo pulls away, groaning. She presses her teeth together, a strangled noise escaping the back of her throat as she bucks her hips up, softly, slowly, her eyes widening at the firmer push of Xanxus' thumb against her cunt.

Xanxus clicks his tongue, chuckles, slips his fingers inside her without warning. Her knees jerk apart and she howls out a breathy noise, grips his shoulders tight when he thrusts his fingers in smoothly, adding another one with little preamble.

"Fucking slut. You've done this before, haven't you?" Xanxus grunts in disgust, shoving his fingers in deeper. She's wetter now, and his fingers slipslip in smooth and quick. She doesn't answer his question and that pisses him off even more, and he kicks his pants off, belt buckle hitting the floor with a loud thud, her panties following shortly after.

She stares at his cock with the kind of wide-eyed look that makes her seem younger than she actually is, cheeks rosy, mouth soft and wet. "Y-you're not going to-" He doesn't let her finish. He grabs her by the hair roughly, and he kisses her until their teeth clink together and she groans a complaint against his mouth, but it's too late now, too late, she's pissed him off enough, and there's no way in hell that Xanxus is going to let her get away with it.

He pushes inside her in one smooth slide and something insider her gives. Something inside her breaks, and she breaks a little too, her eyes even wider, her face pale as Xanxus holds her knees up and edges deeper, closer. Fuck it she's so tight, so wet, so soft, and he moves his hips and she says in a small, strangled voice, "no, no, f-fucking get off of me, it hurts." But it's her fault anyway - she wants this, he knows it.So wet for him and her cheeks flushed and rosy.

Squalo grits her teeth and lets out a moan of pain, but Xanxus doesn't stop even when she tries pushing him off and the corners of her eyes fill with angry tears. She claws at his back, raking angry lines down his skin, presses sharp teeth against his shoulder, leaving a mark. "It hurts, bastard, fucking hurts, pull out!" He reaches under her shirt again, twists a nipple between his fingers, and shoveshoveshoves forward until he's buried into the hilt, until he's fucking her good and thorough and she starts to moan and buck for him. Until he finds a pace and follows it, every wet slide of tongue punctuated by a rough jerk of their hips as he fucks her into the mattress.

"This," Xanxus whispers into her ear, "this is how you swear your allegiance."

She nods fitfully against his shoulderblade, eyes wet with lust, long legs hooked over his hips. She keeps one hand up Xanxus' hair, the other one pressed against the flat of her back.

"Fuck me, fuck me harder," she says, breathy. "Or is this all you have to give? All bark and no bite?" She thrusts up against him, eyes glinting with mischief.

It sets Xanxus off, and pretty soon he hauls her up on all fours, jerks her knees apart and fucks her to shut her up. She lets out a stream of noises, each one louder than the last as she pushes back against his cock and steadies herself on her elbows and knees. Xanxus traces the bumps of her spine with tongue and teeth, bites down hard enough to leave a mark to get her back for scratching him earlier. She yelps, throwing her head back; Xanxus shoves her facedown into the mattress and he pulls her back into position, cock nudging her folds apart, and there it is again, the wet warmth of her, the trembling of her thighs.

He comes inside her, digging his hips forward against her back, riding out his orgasm until he slumps on top of her, barely catching his breath. Squalo rolls her hips, looking for more, angry now that he finished ahead. Her eyebrows draw together sharply and she jerks her hips back, pushing tirelessly against him. "OI! Y-you didn't let me finish! How am I supposed to --oh." Her eyes finally close, her hair splays out on the pillows.

Xanxus presses her down on her back, fingers her into orgasm.

"Dirty whore," he whispers, and lets her lick his fingers clean.
La Mia Tristezza: [khr][XS] ahh--more~!redmoonmurder on January 7th, 2009 07:17 am (UTC)

That was hot.

I need. a nosebleeding icon. fffffffffffffffffffffffffffff ♥
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 03:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading! ♥
And your icon is just fine, haha.
lauren: khr :: d18 :: if you like it violentseasalts on January 7th, 2009 07:18 am (UTC)
Oh man, I love genderbend Squalo (and Xanxus) so this just made my day. Loved it!
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 03:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading! Glad it made your day!
Yamiryu the Original Jack of Antics: XS OTP <3sanzo_holic on January 7th, 2009 08:40 am (UTC)
Super hot. *w*

Wonderful work as always!
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 04:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you! as always? lol, I beg to differ
.•°Cristina°•.: koukou debut≡ ? ←talklikeazombie on January 7th, 2009 08:58 am (UTC)
Fffff holy crap that was sexy!
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 04:00 pm (UTC)
Glad you think so! Thank you for reading! ♥
galeaya: <3 rayflogaleaya on January 7th, 2009 10:56 am (UTC)
hot. hot. hot.

[the loyalty part made me think of 59. now I have the urge to write girl!Squalo with gokudera... O...O]
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 04:01 pm (UTC)
thank you. thank you. thank you.

[go write that fic, I'd like to see more of fem!Squalo ♥]
keleosnoonna: Katekyo Hitman Reborn || Squalokeleosnoonna on January 7th, 2009 11:16 am (UTC)
Girl!Squalo was really interesting to read too XD

proboscus on January 7th, 2009 04:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
P: Card Captor Sakura - The Li Sistersagentlerain on January 7th, 2009 03:35 pm (UTC)
asldaskjahkjdlshdkaja, I FLAIL AT THIS SO BADLY.

I mean, it almost gets to the point of rape, (and I was about to look away) but you turned it around, because Squalo still probably gets turned on by it. *sweatdrops*

Fem!Squalo and Dino, just hilarious.And Xanxus's jealousy. :P

*____* I love it~
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 04:02 pm (UTC)

Thank you for reading! ♥
(no subject) - agentlerain on January 7th, 2009 04:34 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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Sam: khr: HELLBUS lolartillie on January 7th, 2009 03:45 pm (UTC)
Good god--I was going to try and fill this prompt (I'm the anon who asked the question), but you did it so much better than I ever could have OTL That was hot.
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 03:57 pm (UTC)
I, - you can still write it. Whatever you churn out will definitely be better and there's nothing wrong with having two fem!squalo fics, right? RIGHT?

ASDFGHJKL, so sorry. ;--;
(no subject) - artillie on January 7th, 2009 04:40 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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Like snow in summer or rain in harvest: I'm still heretokei on January 7th, 2009 03:59 pm (UTC)
*fans self* THAT. WAS. HOT.

You write female!Squalo so well! :D
proboscus on January 7th, 2009 04:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you think so! :D

desumethis on January 7th, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC)
h-holy shit that was awesome, senpai *A* i am at a loss for anything else beautiful and coherent to say.
proboscus on January 8th, 2009 12:25 am (UTC)
LOLWHUT. Thanks for reading. ♥
Oujo-sama: pic#83703921akumugan on January 8th, 2009 07:21 am (UTC)

Whew. Hot. Very hot. Fem!Squalo and Xanxus are always great to read.

Whew, jeez. *flaps self* Awesome. Simpley awesome. Write more please.
proboscus on January 8th, 2009 09:00 am (UTC)

Your icon is enough to make me feel uber special. Thank you for giving this the time of day~ ♥
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delonariel: en rosedelonariel on January 20th, 2009 11:22 pm (UTC)
You had *nothing* to worry about.

You did a really good job preserving Squalo's personality too, which can be difficult when writing genderbender. I'd really love to see more of this
azurecerulean: cg groupazurecerulean on October 3rd, 2009 11:57 am (UTC)
You claimed that PWP is not your field of expertise, but this fic is better than many PWPs out there. Now I'm craving for more of your fics.
turtlelikelemon: squalo xanxusturtlelikelemon on December 3rd, 2009 09:25 am (UTC)
oh that was nothing..